Hi Luqman, I really like the way you did this slide about Diwali.
I like it when you told me the story, but what happened after, did they find Sita? Where did Sita go? did she get killed? Can you please make sure to your writing make sense please.
I really like the way that you have been making your writing very easy to see but can you make it a little bit more interesting?
hi luqman I like your work pleas tell me more about your bollywood and your work is really intrising and I think your work makes sens and keep up the good work and I love your work keep up the good work thank you for the idear thank you laqman for your lovely work
Hi Luqman, I really like the way you did this slide about Diwali.
ReplyDeleteI like it when you told me the story, but what happened after, did they find Sita? Where did Sita go? did she get killed? Can you please make sure to your writing make sense please.
I really like the way that you have been making your writing very easy to see but can you make it a little bit more interesting?
kind regards
Fatafehi
hi luqman I like your work pleas tell me more about your bollywood and your work is really intrising and I think your work makes sens and keep up the good work and I love your work keep up the good work thank you for the idear thank you laqman for your lovely work
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